Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what was has technology affected the types of relationship people make ? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Thesedays
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These days
, interaction among people has
supressed
kept from public knowledge by various means;
suppressed
surprised
due to the development of
technology
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. Relationship with gadgets is now more important than any other kind of relationship among people. According to my view,
technology
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has both pros and cons. In
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essay I will support my opinion with reasons.
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,
technology
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is a boon for each and every sector as it is dominating all fields
for example
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, education, medical, services, and so on. Without these advanced gadgets one cannot match the speed of new developments. Dor instance, earlier mobile phones were not
common but
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common, but
now a cell phone serves not only communication
purpose but
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purpose, but
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it acts as a mini-portable computer.
Technology
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is a need of an hour as robots are developed that help the humans on completing their tasks before
time
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and even the type of work that requires a lot of care and attention.
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, there are always some disadvantages of everything along with advantages. The biggest constraint of
technology
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is
,
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,
it is moving people away from each other
in other
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words people
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words, people
are spending most of their
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with these instruments
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of having quality
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with families or friends. All
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causes the weakening of
bond
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the bond
bonds
of love among family members. Generally, children like to spend their
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on technological appliances by playing video games, watching shows, surfing on
internet
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the internet
, using social sites and so on
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Not only young
generation but
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generation, but
also
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elsers
a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
users
elders
have now became
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has now become
a techno slave
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.
In conclusion, it’s a saying that excess of everything is
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bad, so
same implies to
technology
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. Though it
has make
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has made
the life
easier but
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easier, but
due to its excessive usage people are going away from their emotions toward others
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual relationships
  • social media
  • messaging apps
  • online dating platforms
  • remote work
  • global collaboration
  • family dynamics
  • constant contact
  • in-person interaction
  • physical presence
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