Some people think that managerial posts in private companies and in government are more suitable for men. Others think that given the opportunity women can be successful managers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, males and females are working

paralell

being everywhere equidistant and not intersecting

parallel

however

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earlier, it was assumed that men

has

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have

to lead, but nowadays,

trend

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the trend

has changed, and it has become a debatable question whether men are better managers or women. In

this

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essay, both aspects will be discussed and a plausible conclusion will be extracted. While comparing genders for a managerial role, women's

capabilty

the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally

capability

capacity

capabilities

to organise everything can not be overlooked, they are specifically famous to be more particular about the minor detailings,

esthatic

relating to or dealing with the subject of aesthetics

aesthetic

sense, presentation and accomplishing tasks before time even. A research shows that,

presence

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the presence

female manager

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the female manager

makes office environment more formal, reliable and task achievable, not only they know the art to entangle customers but

also

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employees.

However

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on the other hand

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, we find most of the organizations keep male supervisors as others believe that they keep a broader view of

market

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the market

yet more approachable at any time, including; weekends and midnight.

Moreover

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, frequent

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

out of station or late sittings to make a deal is comparatively more feasible to them as they are not considered to be mainly responsible for home chores.

For instance

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; a male boss can stay in office as long as

needed but

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needed, but

contrary, for female its rather difficult.

Furthermore

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, In most of the

societies

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society

, people feel more comfortable in

presence

Suggestion

the presence

male

Suggestion

males

a male

the male

, they feel free and be real, while it is nearly impossible in

presence

Suggestion

the presence

opposite gender

Suggestion

the opposite gender

For example

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, one can smoke, use inappropriate words or slangs or even share

drink

Suggestion

drinks

with male

bosses but

Accept comma addition

bosses, but

it is nearly impossible with female supervisors.

Thus

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, a level of discomfort rises and leads to dissatisfaction and failures. To sum up, people are divided and have diversified opinions, while I believe, having a male boss is far better in comparison, as

he has wider

Suggestion

he has a wider

market exposure and more time to dedicate to the serving organization.

Thus

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, one should have a leading role of men in order to bring more successes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

322 words

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