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Some people think that managerial posts in private companies and in government are more suitable for men. Others think that given the opportunity women can be successful managers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, males and females are working
paralell
being everywhere equidistant and not intersecting
parallel
,
however
 earlier, it was assumed that men
has
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have
 to lead, but nowadays,
trend
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the trend
 has changed, and it has become a debatable question whether men are better managers or women. In
this
 essay, both aspects will be discussed and a plausible conclusion will be extracted. While comparing genders for a managerial role, women's
capabilty
the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally
capability
capacity
capabilities
 to organise everything can not be overlooked, they are specifically famous to be more particular about the minor detailings,
esthatic
relating to or dealing with the subject of aesthetics
aesthetic
 sense, presentation and accomplishing tasks before time even. A research shows that,
presence
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the presence
 of
female manager
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the female manager
 makes office environment more formal, reliable and task achievable, not only they know the art to entangle customers but
also
 employees.
However
,
on the other hand
, we find most of the organizations keep male supervisors as others believe that they keep a broader view of
market
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the market
 yet more approachable at any time, including; weekends and midnight.
Moreover
, frequent
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 out of station or late sittings to make a deal is comparatively more feasible to them as they are not considered to be mainly responsible for home chores.
For instance
; a male boss can stay in office as long as
needed but
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needed, but
 contrary, for female its rather difficult.
Furthermore
, In most of the
societies
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society
, people feel more comfortable in
presence
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the presence
 of
male
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males
a male
the male
, they feel free and be real, while it is nearly impossible in
presence
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the presence
 of
opposite gender
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the opposite gender
.
For example
, one can smoke, use inappropriate words or slangs or even share
drink
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drinks
 with male
bosses but
Accept comma addition
bosses, but
 it is nearly impossible with female supervisors.
Thus
, a level of discomfort rises and leads to dissatisfaction and failures. To sum up, people are divided and have diversified opinions, while I believe, having a male boss is far better in comparison, as
he has wider
Suggestion
he has a wider
 market exposure and more time to dedicate to the serving organization.
Thus
, one should have a leading role of men in order to bring more successes.
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