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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the salad days of
milliennium
Suggestion
the millennium
millennium
, the society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether few people
taught
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
 it is indispensable to utilize
huge amount
Suggestion
huge amounts
 of
money
 on innovative
railway
 lines for
fast track train
Suggestion
the fast track train
 or others trust that the penny could used on developing existing public transportation. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note. To commence with the
first
 notion, there are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
 things to be shared in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
favor
promote over another
favour
.
First
 and foremost, the reduction in traffic jams.
As a result
, due to
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of public transport the traffic has been
climed
make clean by removing dirt, filth, or unwanted substances from
cleaned
claimed
 in
this
 contemporary era. So, if we are using only new
railway
 lines they will be
deduction
Suggestion
deducted
deducting
 in traffic as well as time and energy.
Secondly
, the decline of
pollution
 may occur.
Consequently
, because of transports like cars
,
Accept space
,
buses they lead emits of fossil
fuels which
Accept comma addition
fuels, which
 are harmful to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. Whereas, the
railway
 lines
emittes
expel (gases or odors)
emits
 less
pollution
. Shifting towards the
second
 school of thought, the personal vehicle
are
Suggestion
is
 much essential.
Hence
, during the emergency we need our own vehicle to travel from one place to another.
Moreover
,
group
Suggestion
the group
groups
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 save
money
 and
also
 time.
Therefore
, for the long distance individual journey is
waste
Suggestion
a waste
 of
money
, rather than we can use public
transport which
Accept comma addition
transport, which
 mainly save
money
, petrol and
also
pollution
 fall. Having discussed argument and counter argument I would like to infer that it is vital to spend
higher amount
Suggestion
a higher amount
higher amounts
 on building new
railway
 lines for very fast trains because it reduce the
pollution
 which almost save our effected mother land. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance of
example
Suggestion
an example
, where in India over 70 percent places is affected with fossil fuels due to
large number
Suggestion
a large number
 of vehicle usage. Hammering the
last
 nail, I personally feel that new
railway
 lines are necessary for happy and safe journey.
Submitted by pawanvika.rishitha on

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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