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It has been said that people who read for pleasure have developed imaginations and gained better language skills than people who prefer watching TV. Do you agree or disagree

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It is widely believed that having an interest in books exerts a much greater impact on boosting imaginary mind and gaining better
language
 ability than glancing at programs on Television. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 view thanks to the enormous benefits we can reap.
Firstly
, a reader can possess not only extensive knowledge but
also
 creativity.
Instead
 of including an illustration or vivid images which watchers have an idea of the characters or happening things, most written materials have a range of structures and abstract, thereby forcing people to pick up their brains to figure out situations narrated if they want to keep up with the plot.
As a result
, they are likely to enhance their creative thought which animated video fails to bring.
Secondly
, people having a passion for books are likely to gain a deeper understanding of the skill of
language
. Unlike video which utilizes a majority of spoken words, written sources
such
 as literature provide a formal word and require readers to pay much attention to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 their underlying meanings, improving their writing skills and better mastering
language
. Expressing their thoughts and emotions in much wiser and more logical format is
as a result
 of applying knowledge from the book.
For example
, my friend, a bookworm, can show
her
female pronoun; a female, or something regarded as female, e.g. a ship
she
 thought
further
 better than the others in my class. In conclusion, reading a book plays a vital role in shaping creativity and possessing better
language
 skills.
Therefore
, it is highly recommended that each individual should form a habit of reading daily.
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