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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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The world we live in is unknown to
many but
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many, but
 due to the advent in technology, it is made possible to travel to remote locations. Several fields like research and tourism may add to its advantageous side.
However
, as the risk of climate change is involved, I firmly believe that a neutral approach should be followed in order to maintain a good atmosphere for everyone.
To begin
 with, a plethora of cogent reasons
prove
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proves
 to beneficial for knowing mankind and nature to a greater extent.
Firstly
, the forests which were hidden from the eyes of the scientist can now study the different aspects of
species
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the species
.
Secondly
, places like South pole can be analysed to get better insights about the characteristics of Earth.
For instance
, a group of researchers from the US, stayed in Antarctica for 6 months to study the causes of depletion of the ozone layer eventually leading to a staggering knowledge.
Finally
, tourists who have a deep feeling of wanderlust or those who want to have a thrilling experience would be benefited the most.
On the other hand
, we must not pollute the very land we live in. With an increase in visitors in these regions, our environment would not be in safe grips.
Furthermore
, a significant amount of people would poison the biosphere which may guide to catastrophic events like weather modification, global warming and many others. To exemplify, in Kedarnath, due to an increased volume of people high pressure was created
thus
 resulting in heavy rainfall and floods. To sum up, I strongly opine in the fact that
although
 there is a dire need for understanding certain areas properly yet it cannot be denied that it should be protected at all cost for the human race to survive so as a whole, only a limited number should be permitted to sustain the beauty of nature.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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