You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words.
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Dear Madam Lee,
I am Hana, and I am from Vietnam.
Last
week, I saw your article
in CBC newspaper that you claimed our town centre was similar to a city in China. I am writing this
letter to express my disagreement with your opinion. There are two things wrong with your article
.
Firstly
, In your article
, you wrote that the goods in my home town are imported from China, and it
was totally wrong. They are made in Vietnam because our Correct pronoun usage
that
country
uses Vietnamese materials to make them. Moreover
, you can check the brand name in
the cover Change preposition
on
which
Correct word choice
and which
country
makes it.
Secondly
, instead
of cats, the iconic animal in my country
is dog
. Add an article
a dog
the dog
For example
, you can see a lot of dogs in the city centre every afternoon.
Therefore
, you need to come to our hometown to see the differences in your article
. Moreover
, if you visit my town centre in the summer, you can the air balloon in the CN building.
Hope you can come to our country
and enjoy the landscapes over here to have a better view. If you need any support some the locals when you come here, please tell me.
Yours faithfully,
HanaSubmitted by hana44happy on
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Task Achievement
Be sure to directly address each point mentioned in the task. Specifically, stating which points in the article you agree with would strengthen your argument and fully complete the task.
Task Achievement
Clarify and expand on how your town centre is unique, providing more specific examples and details to illustrate these differences. This would enrich your response and offer a clearer contrast to the claim made in the article.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly by separating them into distinct paragraphs, each with a single main idea. This will enhance coherence and create a more logical flow of information.
Positive Highlight
You've done a good job with the greeting and closing of your letter, maintaining a formal and polite tone throughout. Keep this up in future writings!
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a consistent use of tense and ensure your grammar supports the clarity of your message. This will further improve the cohesion of your writing.
Writing Tone
The letter is written in a polite and respectful manner, effectively maintaining a suitable tone for formal correspondence.
Engagement
You've successfully offered a guided tour to the author, showing openness and willingness to engage, which adds a personal and constructive touch to your response.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite