In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
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began with, working under any job always teaches a person some great Suggestion
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lessons
First
and foremost, if children are engaged in some kind of paid work
, then
they can learn about the value of money
. They can learn how to save money
while spending it. For instance
, those students who go abroad for studying, they always do part tome
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
work
and save the money
for their school fee and other needs. Secondly
, if the children start working during young age, they can learn about work
experience as well as responsibilities. While working at any job, children are able to know about various skill
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skills
such
as, communication, co-operation, social ethics and so on. Children are also
become
responsible. They will not waste their time for non productive things Suggestion
becoming
such
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dedicated
work
and study.
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, people consider working at paid jobs is not a
appropriate thing. They think Suggestion
an
this
because of two reasons. Firstly
, people think that they will become money
minded person, which may be lead them to illegal Suggestion
a money
work
. Some children do not want to do hard
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the hard work
work
for money
, so they choose the wrong path to make money
. For example
, children become drug deller
, thief, someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold
dealers
black mailer
and so on only for currency. a criminal who extorts money from someone by threatening to expose embarrassing information about them
blackmailer
Secondly
, people think that there
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their
academics
scores will be affected due to their jobs. If children do job while study, Suggestion
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then
they cannot put equal efforts in both fields. One definitely will be affected. So, because of these two reason
people consider it as completely wrong.
To conclude, children should do part time jobs only, so that their Suggestion
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academics
score will not be affected and they should Suggestion
academic
not have motive
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not have a motive
money
. Instead
of that, they should learn about importance
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the importance
money
and responsibilities from work
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