In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Nowadays, children are working
in
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on
some
piad
marked by the reception of pay
paid
bad
jobs for
money
in most of the countries. Many people think that it teaches
children many
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children, many
valuable
leasons
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lessons
,
however others
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however, others
are opposite to
this
ideology and consider
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away from home
out
it
as totally wrong.
This
essay will describe my own perspective toward
this
viewpoint.
To
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Two
began with, working under any job always teaches a person some great
leasons
a unit of instruction
lessons
.
First
and foremost, if children are engaged in some kind of paid
work
,
then
they can learn about the value of
money
. They can learn how to save
money
while spending it.
For instance
, those students who go abroad for studying, they always do part
tome
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
work
and save the
money
for their school fee and other needs.
Secondly
, if the children start working during young age, they can learn about
work
experience as well as responsibilities. While working at any job, children are able to know about various
skill
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skills
such
as, communication, co-operation, social ethics and so on. Children are
also
become
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becoming
responsible. They will not waste their time for non productive things
such
as social media. They become more
dedicate
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dedicated
to
work
and study.
On the other hand
, people consider working at paid jobs is not
a
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an
appropriate thing. They think
this
because of two reasons.
Firstly
, people think that they will become
money
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a money
minded person, which may be lead them to illegal
work
. Some children do not want to do
hard
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the hard work
work
for
money
, so they choose the wrong path to make
money
.
For example
, children become drug
deller
someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold
dealers
, thief,
black mailer
a criminal who extorts money from someone by threatening to expose embarrassing information about them
blackmailer
and so on only for currency.
Secondly
, people think that
there
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they're
their
academics
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academic
scores will be affected due to their jobs. If children do job while study,
then
they cannot put equal efforts in both fields. One definitely will be affected. So, because of these two
reason
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reasons
people consider it as completely wrong. To conclude, children should do part time jobs only, so that their
academics
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academic
score will not be affected and they should
not have motive
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not have a motive
to collect
money
.
Instead
of that, they should learn about
importance
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the importance
of
money
and responsibilities from
work
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Child labor
  • Exploitation
  • Minimum age
  • Work experience
  • Survival
  • Taking responsibility
  • Education
  • Poverty
  • Legal restrictions
  • Physical toll
  • Psychological impact
  • Cultural perceptions
  • International conventions
  • Economic impact
  • Work-study programs
  • Skilled labor
  • Unskilled labor
  • Developing economies
  • Moral implications
  • Professional development
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