There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is a great evidence for the rising usage of cars. Huge increase in global warming and other effects on

human’s

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human

health and well-being are viewed as a potential problem caused by

increasing use

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the increasing use

of automobiles.

This

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easy

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easement

will discuss why more utilisation of cars has led to surge in temperature of

earth

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the earth

and created a

lot

Use synonyms

of problems to human health. More utility of cars has created an impact by

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the earth’s temperature as they release a

lot

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of toxic

gases

Suggestion

gas

. They give out gases like carbon

di oxide

an oxide containing two atoms of oxygen in the molecule

dioxide

, nitrogen etc. Especially carbon

di oxide

an oxide containing two atoms of oxygen in the molecule

dioxide

has a major role in contributing to the global warming because they do not allow the essential gases to show their presence. They dominate all other gases. It does not give space to oxygen

as a result

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which increases the heat in the atmosphere. These

gases

an occurrence of something

cases

will not allow the trees to occupy their space and they are all vanished. After the loss of trees, there was

reduction

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a reduction

in the amount of rain as they are

corelated

mutually related

correlated

correlate

to each other. Overall, it illustrates that release of toxic substances reduce

rainfall level which

Suggestion

the rainfall level, which

the rainfall level which

rainfall levels which

leads to the rise of heat in the earth. People’s physical health and well-being is

also

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being damaged a

lot

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, as there are no activities

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the body

expect

take exception to

except

the way the humans tend to move from place to place. But nowadays even these are being replaced by automobiles which has initiated the growth of diseases. Lack of physical activity has ruined one’s life by making a person become overweight. Obesity is one the important and base reason for

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lot

Suggestion

a lot

lots

of problems like heart attack, pressure etc. These are all dramatically growing as the days pass by because there is

minimum contribution

Suggestion

the minimum contribution

given by the

movable

Suggestion

moving

body parts. To conclude, I strongly agree that the rising usage of vehicles has played a major role in rising global warming and by

also

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having unwanted effects on human’s and their well-being as they release a

lot

Use synonyms

of toxic

gases

Suggestion

gas

and reduce the need for physical activities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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