You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why is it important for the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
about
an article in your magazine that contained misleading information about the recent mishap that took place at the Sai Baba Temple in Hyderabad, India. The magazine stated that there were several casualties which I know for the fact that there were none.
Every year on the 29th of June, the temple celebrates a festival named Sravan Mass; which is supposed to be an auspicious day Change preposition
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for
the
Hindu devotees. Correct article usage
apply
This
year, due to unexpected
increase in the number of people, a stampede occurred injuring around 20 people. Since Correct article usage
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this
is a sacred place and well know across the country, thousands of families’
travel from every corner to witness Correct your spelling
families
this
powerful day. Such
false information can not only affect the reputation but also
the beliefs of the people who come to visit.
Therefore
, in the near future, I would strongly suggest that the magazine initially
works together with the local temple officials and the police department to get their facts right as there would be lot
of things at stake.
I hope you would take the necessary action at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Nikhil KumarChange the article
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