Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.
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It is expected that one of the primary duties of parents is to make sure that their offspring indulge in a daily workout at home, and educational institutes should drop off games or physical exercises from their syllabus.
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essay disagrees the opinion that health education is Linking Words
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To begin
with, students spend the majority of their time with teachers and other children; Linking Words
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, they have a higher tendency to acquire discipline and skills faster at schools. If teachers emphasize the importance of exercises, physical games and so on, Linking Words
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students would pick up those naturally and comfortably. Linking Words
For example
, my younger brother mastered yoga when his teacher motivated him to practice it at school with other kids.
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cognitively
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is when pupils confront situations where they have to make decisions, either as an individual or as a team to succeed, they work out their mental abilities and cognition to make a right decision; thereby, building or enhancing their internal strengths. Linking Words
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, while I used to play soccer during childhood, I used to meticulously examine the position of opponents, in order to make a striking pass through to my teammates. Linking Words
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enhanced my intellectual and problem-solving skills to leaps and bounds.
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build and mature their mental skills which are essential for their development. Linking Words
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, sports and other fitness activities should not be ignored at school, Linking Words
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be given due importance alongside other subjects.Accept comma addition
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