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It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#books #contrast #source
The present generation
are
Suggestion
is
 under the impression that books do not necessarily contain complete knowledge for making up a personality. From my perspective, what a person learns from their daily activities and over years of experience is much
important
Suggestion
more important
 than reading it.
Firstly
, there are some who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that books are the ultimate source of knowledge as it records experience from the past.
This
, is one
such
 source which contains experience from the past which serves as lessons learnt to the present generation.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly disagree on that, people find
ut
the thing named or in question
it
 difficult to envision incidents when they read.
On the other hand
, others believe that practical knowledge has
outraced
 theoretical approach with the advent of technology. One
such
 example is shown with resent study, wherein, teenagers could solve real life robotics system because they were exposed to
practicals
a customary way of operation or behavior
practices
 that involved touching and adapting real time robots as apposed to
traditional approach
Suggestion
the traditional approach
 of seeing
then
objective case of they
them
 in magazines.
Nevertheless
, any person will have to show
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
 from their side to make anything happen. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think exposure to
real time enironment
Suggestion
the real time environment
real time environment
 is helpful in teaching everyone about the possible outcomes and impediments.
Such
initiaties
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiatives
 need to be escalated in the future.
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