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Writing Samples
Band 7

You will take a short holiday in London next month and would like to spend some time with a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Tell him when you will be in London and why •Ask him for recommendations of what to do there •Suggest some things you can do together You should You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Yash, I hope you are doing absolutely fantastic! I'm beyond thrilled
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 I am writing
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 letter and informing you that I'm travelling to
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 next month for vacation, I am really happy to hang out with you and recreate our old memories again.
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, I will arrive at Ethrow airport on 12th March, and the purpose of my visit is very special
London
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 is my dream destination, it is a hidden gem with a laid-back atmosphere and charm all its own, I have watched
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 in numerous Bollywood movies, I have watched many historical buildings, streets,
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 Bridge and
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 eye on youtube videos. So,
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 trip is to fulfil my childhood dream.
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, I want you to join me and both of us will travel together and explore different places, traditions and cultures, we will do a leisurely walk downtown and indulge in some mouth-watering cuisine at the cosy restaurants and cafes. I hope both of us together make
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 plan extremely memorable. I look forward to your response. Yours Truly, Vairag.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking your ideas into separate paragraphs to improve clarity, particularly for your arrival details and activities suggestion.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your sentences are smoother and logically connected to create a better reading flow.
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Try to elaborate more on the recommendations you are seeking from your friend to show more engagement with the task.
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Your enthusiasm and friendly tone come through strongly, making the letter engaging to read.
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You effectively expressed your excitement about visiting London and your intention to reconnect with your friend, which adds a personal touch.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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