In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #smoke #places #people

Smoking is prohibited in most areas of the nation

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because it

affect

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affects

public which lead to cancer.If smokers want to

smoke

have to leave building premises due to environmental issues.I firmly agree with both the statement

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Many countries have started banning public smoking.When an individual

smoke

in a public place

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is widely affecting

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widely affects

the smoker as well as the individual who is near to that person.

This

cause serious issue

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with

the person's breathing system

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Eventhough

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Even though

the

person near to the

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person near the

smoker do not

smoke

when they try to breath the oxygen

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the

smoke

get

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gets

into his lungs and cause serious health problems which ends up

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with

cancer.

For example

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as per the report of

leicester

an industrial city in Leicestershire in central England; built on the site of a Roman settlement

Leicester

university

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Non-smokers

a person who does not smoke tobacco

nonsmokers

nonsmokers'

are dying more than the smokers in most part of the

countries

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country

. Building authorities have started prohibiting the smokers in

thier

of them or themselves

their

areas due to pollution.

when

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When

an individual

smoke

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large amount of stag is

been

the state or fact of existing

being

formed which

condaminating

spreading pollution or contamination; especially radioactive contamination

contaminating

the fresh air and lead to pollution.And

this

compleltly affect

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completely affects

completely affect

has completely affected

is completely affecting

theenvironment

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the environment

As a result

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this

pollution tune the climate change and ends up in disaster.

For instance

, In Ontario most condominiums have been strictly

enforcing

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enforced

on people who

smoke

within the building

becuase

for the reason that; on account of

because

it is widely effecting the weather.

to a very great extent or degree

condominiums have a smoking zone

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anyone tried to

smoke

outside the smoking zone or within 500 meters to the building will be fined $4000. To sum up

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I firmly accept the statement that most countries have prohibited smoking in common places because of human health.As well as it is

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

right

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for

those people who want to

smoke

have to leave the premises.

However

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If someone tried to do so

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will be penalised.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35Grammar mistakes
 

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271 words

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

secondhand smoke
respiratory problems
cardiovascular disease
clean air
public health
hospital admissions
economic benefits
smoking cessation
cultural shift
healthcare costs
smoke-free laws
enforcement
designated smoking areas
compliance
social attitudes

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