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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
In recent times
,
Accept space
,
very few teenagers are seen to be working in
vairety
Suggestion
a variety
variety
 of
retailer
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retail
 shops. As few people believe that teenagers are necessary to
work
 for free in community related
work
 during their
liesure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
 period.
This
 essay illustrates some of the
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 of working for teenagers.
To begin
 with, teenagers will help the
society
 in some way by doing other people's job. As they will get to know about the insights of how the people are
stuggling
engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
 to get paid. To exemplify, if teenagers
agrees
Suggestion
agree
 to
work
 for the
society
, it will be helpful for the people, as it reduces some amount of burden which are carried out. In short, we could say that children will learn to be considerate to others. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 way,
its
it is
it's
 going to
benift
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
 the children as they will get good exposure to
outside world
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the outside world
.
For example
, if children are found to be spending time on their own, it will affect them in
future
Suggestion
the future
, as they would not have any background knowledge of how the
work
life
 is balanced in the
society
.
Moreover
, working for the
society
 will teach them a good cultural knowledge, develops interpersonal skills and
value
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the value
 of their
work
.
However
,
Accept space
,
it is known that one should earn his/her own bread, its every parents
responsibity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
 to guide their children in a proper manner, by teaching them the values of
life
 and importance of working. While
on the other hand
, teenagers should co-operate with their parents to learn the importance of
thier
of them or themselves
their
life
 and not to waste
thier
of them or themselves
their
 valuable time in other unnecessary activities. To conclude, it is necessary for a child to do unpaid community related
work
, as it teaches them the value of
life
 rather than being money minded, where money does not play a vital role in
child's
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the child's life
a child's life
life
, as it is taken care from
thier
of them or themselves
their
 parents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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