It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Knowledge
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is the information or skills acquired through
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or
book
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, who is keen to learn, can acquire
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from different sources with different contrast.
Experience
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is
knowledge
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or mastery of an event or subject gained through involvement in or exposure to it.
Experience
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comes with trying out and exploring thingies rather than just seeking
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. If we have to compare the
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from
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against the
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from
experience
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there are wonderful
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which can provide
tremendous amount
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a tremendous amount
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knowledge but
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knowledge, but
these
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you might have not implemented in your real life, if you tried
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in real life you might have found
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a better solution
better solutions
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.
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comes with the
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take an example of problem solving you can gain all related information and
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from a given
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, but when you try to do it in real time you may find alternative
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find the optimal
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out of it. If you encounter
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the same problem
again in life as you have tried it you already knew the
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is how
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helps. Hands on makes any person master in that task I prefer the
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gain through
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rather than from a
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