It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Knowledge

is the information or skills acquired through

experience

book

, who is keen to learn, can acquire

knowledge

from different sources with different contrast.

Experience

knowledge

or mastery of an event or subject gained through involvement in or exposure to it.

Experience

comes with trying out and exploring thingies rather than just seeking

knowledge

. If we have to compare the

knowledge

from

book

against the

knowledge

from

experience

there are wonderful

book

which can provide

tremendous amount

Suggestion

a tremendous amount

knowledge but

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knowledge, but

these

knowledge

you might have not implemented in your real life, if you tried

this

in real life you might have found

better

Suggestion

a better solution

better solutions

solution

This

comes with the

experience

take an example of problem solving you can gain all related information and

solution

from a given

book

, but when you try to do it in real time you may find alternative

solution

then

find the optimal

solution

out of it. If you encounter

same problem

Suggestion

the same problem

again in life as you have tried it you already knew the

solution

this

is how

experience

helps. Hands on makes any person master in that task I prefer the

experience

gain through

experience

rather than from a

book

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197 words

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Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement say what time is suitable for you Describe what you are planning to do

In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

Some people think that museum should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through the Internet, so there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view?