Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

In the current era, where

majority

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the majority

of parents spare limited

time

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for their pupil,

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,

effects

have an effect upon

affects

the holistic development of

youngminds

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young minds

as compared to the

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

of previous years. I vehemently agree with

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statement as inadequate surveillance by parents towards their

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children's

child's

education is the primary reason and lack of nutrients in

diet

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the diet

, because of junk food is the secondary reason. The reasons behind

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negative phenomenon is

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, negligence in tracking the academic performance of the school goer by their guardians. It is because of the busy regime of the parents in respect

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of

their occupation, it takes a large chunk of

time

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away from children,

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, no check is kept of the educational record of the youngster,

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, hampers their intellect. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by

Education department

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the Education department

of Sydney, states that 73% of parents of Australia, barely get

adeqaute

having the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task

adequate

amount of

time

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to scrutinise the academic report of their children, which eventually, proves detrimental towards the education of children.

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, imperfect diet given to children is another reason. As parents of recent

time

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, have a lust for prepared meals from

renonwed

widely known and esteemed

renowned

restaurants.

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, because of which ready made cuisines are served to children. Whereas, the food does not attain

requisite amount

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the requisite amount

of vitamins and minerals for holistic development of children.

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, an article published in CNX news, there is 67% of inclination towards junk food by masses as compared to a decade ago, because of which children of recent times are getting unhealthy. To conclude, it is to adhere

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, parents of current times are less concerned about their children as compared to the parents of the earlier periods.