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Band 6.5

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to express my sorrow regarding additional charges for my vehicle
insurance
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.
This
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 incremental cost would hamper my fiscal position because it would increase my expenses.
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, it would be considered
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as
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breach
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a breach
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 of contract. I am a regular customer of your
renonwed
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renowned
insurance
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 company in Alberta, Canada. I have followed all the safety guidelines of the
insurance
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 to drive the car with caution and have never taken
claim
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 for any accident in the previous years. All these conditions of the owner's manual have been
fullfilled
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fulfilled
 by me.
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, I should not be considered liable for the
raise
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rise
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 in the price of
insurance
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 as it would be against the terms and conditions of the contract when I purchased the
insurance
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. So, I humbly request you to take my name
off
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off-register
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register
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the register
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 from your system. As per my fine record and synchronised approach towards the obligations of your
insurance
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. I look forward to your affirmative response. Yours faithfully, Smith brown

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