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some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views

#people #animals #zoos #entertainment
Now days, there are different prospects about
keeping
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the keeping
 of animals. Most disagreements are about how to keep creatures and what should be the conditions. I will discuss these views in diverse directions of environmental, personal, and economic perspectives. One of the most important advantages of keeping animals in zoos, is
protect
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protecting
 them from bad weathers, hunters, and feeding accessibility. In spite of
this
, if we create a lot of restrictions on animals
such
 as, imprisonment them in tight spaces, they would not be able to have bracing air and pursue other animals.
consequently
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Consequently
, circumstances of keeping creatures are vital for living them.
living
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Living
 animals in natural dweller must be
major program
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a major program
the major program
 for caring them
in
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to
 run the world, to give them the chance
to
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of
 exposure usual being. Some animals are becoming
extinct
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extinct, therefore
therefore
, saving them is very crucial.
although
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Although
 huge budget is spent on keeping
their
belonging to them
theirs
, the revenues will offset all costs. Take a kind of Chinese bear famous as
panda
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a panda
,
for instance
; a wide range of people
travel
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travels
 to
china
a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world
China
 to see these animals in zoos or circuses every year.
notwithstanding
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Notwithstanding
; most citizens decline the investment of governments for caring animals and find it as futile.
they
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They
 prefer that states invest in improving infrastructure,
such
 as
build
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a build
the build
 of highways, airports, hospitals and so on.
this
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This
people
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person
consider
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considers
 the development of
country
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the country
 more important than conservation of animals. In the end,
animals caring
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animals, caring
 plays an important role in the advancement of scientific
research whereas
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research, whereas
this
 approach has been rejected in sakes of morally and
religious
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religiously
.
most
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Most
 people believe we have no right to use animals of amusement and in labs. As has been noted, keeping animals in zoos might have countless advantages in provided that they are not kept away from their natural habitat. Reasonable causes behind that, respect the rights of animals to have better living conditions.
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