Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people believe that learning from
past
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the past
has no value for us living in the present. I totally disagreed with the statement and believe that learning from the past has many benefits.
To begin
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with, it is true that people should learn from their mistakes and do better in the present.
For example
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, building homes in the area where higher chances of floods, so it is better opportunity for builders to learn from their mistakes and never build any house in the flooding areas.
On the other
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hand there
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hand, there
are some children who failed in the past exam should learn from
there
of them or themselves
their
mistakes while, given
test
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the test
again so that they would definitely get good marks.
However
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, there are some scientists who do lots of research for inventing something
,
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,
but they should
also
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learn from
past
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the past
.
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.
For example
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, invention of
internet
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the internet
are
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is
only possible because of past
tele
a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program
tales
title
trail
communicatiom
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
like how people connect
eachother
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each other
and do lots of conversation.
Therefore
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, invention of
internet
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the internet
would not
happened
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happen
without
help
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the help
of
past
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the past
. There are some scientist who
invent
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invents
some medicine to prevent health with the help of past
aurvedic
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medicine. So it is true that lots of people learned from their mistakes and improve their life. To
conlcude
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think learning from the past is very beneficial for humans because there are many inventions done with the help of past and there are many people improve their life with the help of
this
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. So learning from the past is not only beneficial for
people but
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people, but
also
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for
scientist
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a scientist
scientists
to do some inventions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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