Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Things like books

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flight tickets

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home needs

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are

moslty

in large part; mainly or chiefly

mostly

buying

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bought

in

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the E - shopping

and it is becoming more popular. In my opinion the advantages are more than

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the disadvantages

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, the advantage of online buying is saving the money. When we buy the thing in online it will cost low compared to when buying in the stores.

Secondly

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, we can save the time by purchasing in the online.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, the time management will play a crucial role in

humans

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human

human's

life. So buying the items in the stores will take more time compared to purchasing

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at

online.

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, there are

number

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a number

of different items in the online. Where we can choose the required model we

want but

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want, but

in stores we have to choose the products within the limited number of models and sometimes the there will be no

availabilty

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of products at festival seasons.

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, if we buy the things

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on

from

online site

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online sites

an online site

like amazon there we can opt the model whatever we

required but

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required, but

whereas in stores we should have to choose the

product

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within the limited models. One disadvantage of the online shopping is

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quality

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the quality

of the

product

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. When we buy the

product

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from online we cannot check the

quality

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, when we buy the rice bag from online we cannot check

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quality

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the quality

of the

rice but

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rice, but

when we buy the same item in the store we can check

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

quality

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. Another disadvantage of the purchasing the thing in internet is

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warranty issue

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a warranty issue

. When we purchase the item in online some products will not have the

warranty

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on the

purcahsed

obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

purchased

item.

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, when

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

buy the headphones from online and after one week it is stopped working and there is no

warranty

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issue on the

headphones but

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headphones, but

when you buy at stores we can get

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warranty

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a warranty

on

product

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