Modern technology is now very common in the most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology

We are living in an era of technological advancement and it is frequently used in most of the workplace.
Although
there are some drawbacks of excessively rely on it, but I believe that,
this
have
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has
numerous benefits to accelerate the way of working.
To begin
with, technology help employees to do a task
quickly
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quicker
more quickly
than before and it
is have
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has
impact
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an impact
on changes the working method.
Firstly
, in every office in the workplace
now have
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now has
has now had
is now having
computers which
is
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are
an essential
things
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thing
to execute
work
.
For example
, nowadays our banking system has
bring
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brought
changes
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
function by using
computer
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a computer
computers
, where the transaction of money and the customer account details has been kept.
This
provides more security in these
sector
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sectors
.Because, before the uses of
computer people
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the computer people
have to go there to transfer their money's to another bank, but now it has done by
used
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using
these device
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these devices
this device
.
In addition
, the innovation of
technologies reduced
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technologies, reduced
the working time of worker and give
then
objective case of they
them
foexibility
the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped
flexibility
in the workplaces.As a consequence, now it is to keep
record
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records
all of the valuable information on office database and do not need to
writing
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write
be writing
have written
it in
papers
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the papers
.
However
, uses of modern technology in working environment have
same negative affect
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the same negative effect
same negative effect
. Employee are not willing to
work
physically and entirely depending on
computer
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the computer
, which sometimes creates
major problem
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a major problem
such
as, hacking the information
by
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with
others.If they put it through handwriting, it's never been hacked.
Furthermore
, the usage of
techical
of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill
technical
device makes them lazy and sometimes they are reluctant to
work
.Despite
this
has bad impacts, it gives lots of advantages to complete the
work
on
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in
an office or
industry
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industrial
. In conclusion, today's innovative technologies help us to comfortably
worked
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work
in
workplace
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the workplace
.Whist, some people depend on it too
much but
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much, but
the benefits of it is far better than disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • software applications
  • high-speed internet
  • communication
  • collaboration
  • geographical boundaries
  • remote work
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • skill gaps
  • job displacement
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence
  • dependency
  • security risks
  • data breaches
  • cyber attacks
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