In many countries people are living in a throw away society where things are used for a short time and throw away. what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to

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contemporay
characteristic of the present
contemporary
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perfer
like better; value more highly
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cause to repeat a cycle
recycled
or
reparied
restore by replacing a part or putting together what is torn or broken
repaired
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efficienc
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
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time restrains, they were choosing simplest and fastest methods over traditional ones where they had to go
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the repair
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win approval or support for
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an abundance
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home delivery and
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a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalment
instrument
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excerssime
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
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are leading to increase in wastage
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influencing environment pollution plus they are responsible for altering the product cost like high and low depending upon the demands. For
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an instant
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was purchasing
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used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Obsolescence
  • Consumerism
  • Sustainable practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Depletion of natural resources
  • Landfills
  • Pollution
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Social inequality
  • Marketing strategies
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