People aim to achieve balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to over come it?

These days, many people aspire to
maniatian
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
a work-life
balance though
Accept comma addition
balance, though
, a very few number of people tend to accomplish an equality between
personnel
a short newspaper article about a particular person or group
personal
and professional lives. Hectic working schedules and
unaviodable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
situations have created an imbalance in people's lives. In
this
essay we will discuss about several causes and suggest
soltions
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
to tackle the problem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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