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some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school Do you agree or disagree?

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Managing Money is one of the most important
task
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tasks
 in
everbody's
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everybody's
everybody
 life. It should to be taught to children because the sooner they
learn the
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learn, the
 better it will be
forthem
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for them
 in the future. The children who have their parents aren't aware of how much
hardwork
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hard work
 they do to earn the money to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their demands until and unless they start earning for themselves. Parents don't mind when their kids are young and they accept their demands and consummate them. As the time passes by and the children
grow they
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grow, they
 become aware of the materials
such
 as
cellphones
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cell phones
, portable gaming consoles
etc
,
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,
 and tell
this
 to their parents so that they can purchase it for them. But the problem is parents start becoming concerned about their child's demand and how it will change in the future. Nowadays demands have increased so drastically that they are unaware of the financial situation of the house and it needs to be taken care of. To deal with
such
 a problem schools can play an important role to create financial awareness among youngsters. Schools can organise a trip for kids to different kinds of orphanage homes so that they become aware of how hard it is to earn money.
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