OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Hi Ruth, How have you been? Hope you're not angry with me that I've not called you in a while. My work schedule has become so tight lately. As a matter of fact, my boss nominated me for the

two day

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workshop coming up in Kaduna State. It will commence

this

weekend. That means I will have to be there before the weekend so I don't miss any part of the program. I'm looking at coming over on a Thursday and going back on Saturday. I was informed that the venue is very close to your residence. In view of that, I will like to stay at your place

instead

of a hotel because of the proximity.

Additionally

, it will be more convenient for me but subject to your approval. I wish to assure you that you will not have to incur any expenses on my behalf. I will be responsible for my feeding and out of pocket expenses.

Furthermore

, you do not have to drive me to the place since we have an official bus for that purpose. Warm regards, Jane

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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