Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Sporting activities like diving and

skying

a sport in which participants must travel on skis

skiing

, are thought by some to have a detrimental effect and should be prohibited.

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my opinion, I completely disagree with the notion that these sports are dangerous and I believe they should not be banned. In my opinion, these sports are not as dangerous as many people might think. All sporting activities are associated with an element of

risk

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risk, thus

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, proper measures have been put in place to lower

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For instance

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, footballers have suffered disabling injuries during matches despite

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sport

being regarded

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been regarded

as safe. Extreme sports have a certain age group and prerequisites that have been instituted to promote

safety

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. Beginners or freshers have to

enroll

enrol

in certain registered clubs and undergo suitable training and attain a certain level of competence before practising solo.Special protective clothings have been designed and the

safety

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measures are being improved daily to promote

safety

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However like

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However, like

any sports, accidents do

happen but

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happen, but

should not result in these sports being

mislabled

branded or labeled falsely and in violation of statutory requirements

mislabelled

as dangerous. Banning of these sports would be very difficult, if not impossible.

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, these sports are practised in remote secluded areas away from where the authorities have immediate access. These areas have been chosen as they have ample space and do not pose a threat to the general public as they are far away from dwellings.

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, people should be autonomous and be able to choose a sport they like. I believe that prohibiting people would be infringing on

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right. In conclusion, extreme sports have been misrepresented as dangerous and

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, should not be banned. Several

safety

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regulations are being constantly reviewed and people have every right to choose any recreational activity they prefer.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

adrenaline rush
risk threshold
thrill-seeking
safety protocols
hazard assessment
adventure tourism
regulatory framework
personal autonomy
informed consent
risk mitigation strategies
thrill-seeking behavior
protective gear
extreme athleticism
freedom of choice
accident prevalence
emergency response
courage and resilience
endorphin release
legal implications
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