Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for individuals and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

The choice of what type of
food
to eat has become a subject of debate
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while
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While
some people believe that eating out is not rewarding
,
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I opine that it is more beneficial and satisfactory to cook our meals ourselves to be sure of the content and the environment where the
food
was prepared.
Firstly
, one major benefit of eating home made
food
is that we are sure of the contents of the meal.
some
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Some
people have things they are allergic to and will not want to taste it
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For example
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I visited a fast
food
in my local borough and I told them I react to
sea
edible fish (broadly including freshwater fish) or shellfish or roe etc
seafood
food
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,
I was still
served
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serving
a meal that had
cray fish
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Cray fish
crayfish
crazy fish
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.
This
lead to serious stomach upset and dermatological issues for me
.
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.
Another point to consider is the environment where the
food
is being cooked. Many canteens are not clean and well ventilated, they make use of water that are not near
purity
(obstetrics) the number of liveborn children a woman has delivered
parity
.
This
has lead to
food
poisoning.
For example
a recent research by the world health organisation has shown that the is a high percentage of
food
poisoning amongst people who eat out regularly.
Furthermore
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it is cheaper to cook at home
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,
you have variety and at liberty to think of when and how the
food
should be prepared. In conclusion
,
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Although
some people prefer to eat out because it appears convenient
,
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I believe it is more profitable to prepare our
food
ourselves as
this
will reduce the incidence of diseases
.
Accept space
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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