The dangers of smoking are well know, yet many people continue this habit. what are the causes of this? how can we reduce smoking in society?

#dangers #people #habit #society

Eventhough

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Even though

, Smoking has dangerous effects, still people consume it.

This

is because of many reasons and we will discuss some of the important ones. Coming

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into

the situations that drive the smokers are as follows.

Firstly

, Habituate, Most of them, got addicted to it, as they are doing it for

long time

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a long time

For

example

, those who are used to something, will find difficult for them to leave it.

Secondly

, Most of the them don't have the information regarding the side effects of doing it.

For

example

, if they are aware of the serious impact on their life,

then

the possibility for them to leave it, may increase.

Thirdly

, Civilization, some youngsters, think that it as a fashion and started it. By the time they

reliase

release, as from one's grip

release

realize

realise

there

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There

is no point of return.

For

example

, Generally, young people who go to pub will get habituated to it, because of the party culture. Regarding the preventive activities.

Initially

, the government should restrict the usage of it, by imposing strict rules.

For

example

, a law to restrict the quantity of selling to an individual.

, Knowledge sharing should be done for the impacts, that are going to happen.

For

example

, an

advertise

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advertising

, to show what are the implications that are going to happen, if they are going to use it. In conclusion, It's not only

responsibility

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the responsibility

of the elected

members but

Accept comma addition

members, but

also

each and every individual to eliminate

this

and develop the better society.

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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