The dangers of smoking are well know, yet many people continue this habit. what are the causes of this? how can we reduce smoking in society?

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Even though

, Smoking has dangerous effects, still people consume it.

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is because of many reasons and we will discuss some of the important ones. Coming

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into

the situations that drive the smokers are as follows.

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, Habituate, Most of them, got addicted to it, as they are doing it for

long time

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a long time

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, those who are used to something, will find difficult for them to leave it.

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, Most of the them don't have the information regarding the side effects of doing it.

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, if they are aware of the serious impact on their life,

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the possibility for them to leave it, may increase.

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, Civilization, some youngsters, think that it as a fashion and started it. By the time they

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release, as from one's grip

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, Generally, young people who go to pub will get habituated to it, because of the party culture. Regarding the preventive activities.

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, the government should restrict the usage of it, by imposing strict rules.

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example

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, a law to restrict the quantity of selling to an individual.

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, Knowledge sharing should be done for the impacts, that are going to happen.

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advertising

, to show what are the implications that are going to happen, if they are going to use it. In conclusion, It's not only

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the responsibility

of the elected

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each and every individual to eliminate

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and develop the better society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

240 words

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The dangers of smoking are well know, yet many people continue this habit. what are the causes of this? how can we reduce smoking in society?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, owning a home is more important rather than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smart phone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?