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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

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The issue of obesity and related health conditions have been increasing
in
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at
a
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an
 alarming rate since
last
 few decades. Excessive consumption of fast foods and lack of exercise
are
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is
 two main
culprit
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culprits
 of
this
;
however
,
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,
this
 can be effectively tackled by adopting
healthy lifestyle
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a healthy lifestyle
 in their day to day
life
. A good reason for climbing number of
obesity
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obese
 people is that availability of junk food.Today, due to busy work schedule most of youngsters
do not get
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are not getting
 enough time for cooking.They
,
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,
consequently
, eat
convenient
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convenience
 food which
are
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is
 easily available along with low price.
Moreover
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,
it
taste
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tastes
 exotic compared to any healthy options.
As a result
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,
large quantity of food
are consumed
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is consumed
 by society and eventually
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,
weight has been increased Another point to consider is that these days people have less physical activity since many are working in
office setting
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an office setting
the office setting
 where they get
minimum room
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a minimum room
 for exercise.Extra pounds
has
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have
 to be burned if anyone wants to keep his body healthy. The impact of obesity is enormous.
Fistly
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Firstly
,
this
 can be disfigured physical appearance and
person
 looks much older than his age;
therefore
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,
obesed
excessively fat
obese
obsessed
abused
person
face
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faces
 lack of confidence in his throughout the
life
,
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,
which will badly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 his
life
.
Secondly
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,
health related issues
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,
as
over weight
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
 causes problems to
cardiovascular system
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the cardiovascular system
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,
brain and hormonal imbalance.To illustrate
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,
this
issues
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issue
certainly reduce
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certainly reduces
has certainly reduced
 his productivity in his work as well as in personal
life
.
Thus
, overweight
cause
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causes
major effect
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a major effect
 in both personal and professional
life
 of a
person
. In conclusion
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,
weighing extra body
weight creates
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weight, creates
 numerous problem to a
person
;
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;
nevertheless
,
this
 must be resolved if
confront
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confronted
 effectively.
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