Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Who is this person Why did you choose him? What is the characteristic of a good employee?
Dear Manager,
I am writing to express my opinion to nominate
Mr.
Kaj from the Technical support department for Change the punctuation
Mr
Best
Employee of the Year award.
As we know, he is very consistent in achieving all the targets that are assigned to his bucket. Correct article usage
the Best
In addition
, he has received many positive feedbacks from clients and customers for delivering excellent customer service. Personally, I am impressed by looking at his potential to solve every problem with his great problem-solving and critical-thinking skills.
Furthermore
, he patiently handled many high-rated customers who were not interested in finding a compromised solution. He always shares his knowledge with peers and assists them with skill development and career growth which motivates them to achieve success. He is highly flexible in our work environment which means he replaces himself with someone who falls sick or takes time off during emergencies.
Finally
, I would like to conclude
that he is a great team player with good characteristics of a potential employee, so I would like to opt him for the recognition.
I look forward to hearing your decision as soon as possible.
yours sincerely,
Manager.Submitted by jeeanay on
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coherence cohesion
Although your letter provides a clear structure with an appropriate greeting and closing, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain coherence.
task achievement
For task achievement, make sure to directly address all three points requested in the prompt: who the person is (which was briefly touched upon), why you chose them, and with a more detailed description of the characteristics of a good employee.