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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

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People's way of living have changed enormously since past few decades.
This
 transformation obviously brought some bad
results
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results, however
however
 in my
opinion these
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opinion, these
 negative changes have been outweighed by the positive ones. Some people argue new living
style s
how something is done or how it happens
styles
 introduced new problems. As evidence
to
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for
of
this
,
they
of them or themselves
their
 points to global warming.
Last
 few decades, Global temperature rose by around 2 to 3 degrees Celsius every
year which
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year, which
 is
Alarming situation
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the alarming situation
the Alarming situation
 for all.
Furthermore
, modern industries and factories produce several waste which directly or
indirectly disturb
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indirectly disturbs
 the original quality of natural resources.
On the other hand
 it can
also
 be argued modern living stars
is
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are
have been
 much better than in the past significant improvements in healthcare, education and economy have developed standard living.
In addition
, due to advancement in technology diseases which were incurable in
past
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the past
 are now cured easily and are under control.
For instance
, Malaria was incurable in
past
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the past, however
the past however
however
in
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at
 present it can be treated easily. To conclude, despite some negative
changes modern
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changes in modern
change modern
change change modern
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
 have
leaded
take somebody somewhere
led
 to
overall development
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the overall development
 of human beings. Meanwhile, negative changes must be addressed quickly along with enjoyment possible as perk of modern lifestyles.
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