Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience

Nowadays, mobiles are not only used for making calls, but
also
various other purposes like watching movies. Some like
watching
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to watch
them in
cinema
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the cinema
, while others support the point. Lets discuss in details some of my experience's, regarding the same. Coming
to
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into
usage
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the usage
of mobile for
movie
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the movie
movies
.
Firstly
, a lot of
time
can be saved in travelling and screen
time
.
For
example
, In
order we
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order, we
need to go there, we have to travel for
certain span
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a certain span
of
time
and stay for some more
time
to complete the task.
Secondly
, Expenditure can be reduced.
For instance
, we have to purchase
ticket
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tickets
for the screen and for parking too, can be reduced when we view it on
phone
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the phone
.
Lastly
, Availibility, we can proceed to view, whenever and where ever we want
too
in the direction of
to
.
For
example
, while
traving
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
in
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by
bus, we can see the
movie
we want,
instead
waiting for specific tie. Regarding the advantages of
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
. At
first
, we will have
feel
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a feel
the feel
of the actual purpose.
For
example
, emotions will be carried, if we are going to watch in the
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
.
Next
, Specific
time
allocation, make us to enjoy the actual purpose.
For
example
, following it for
specific period
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a specific period
specific periods
, may lead to missing of
cretain
definite but not specified or identified
certain
aspects of entertainment.
Then
after, No proper broadcasting media, like internet connection, may hamper the quality of the
movie
.
For
example
, With less bandwidth, we can't have
good quality
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a good quality
in flow and sound. In conclusion, to my opinion, based on my experience, I personally suggest to go
theater
to or toward that place; away from the speaker
thither
and watch the
movie
. They are
enjoyment
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enjoyable
and we need to allocate
sometime
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some time
for it, so make it successful.
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