Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

#methods #today’s #society

Modern world today

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advertisements are ubiquitous among these many are inappropriate for our society.I completely

agree

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agree with this view

this

view point since most of them are creating unwanted needs

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people and falsify the quality of the products. One good reason to support

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argument is that it

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makes

customer

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the customer

believe that they are deserving than what you have today.

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is can be easily understood by watching advertisements how they execute the idea towards its viewers.To illustrate

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skin whitening cream industry

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the skin whitening cream industry

is the one of the biggest industry which

rules

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rule

advertisement sector.By celebrity endorsements

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create an inadequacy in the mind of dull skins, and

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a mixture of lime or gypsum with sand and water; hardens into a smooth solid; used to cover walls and ceilings

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them buy the products. Another good point to consider is that targeting children for business is extremely unethical as children are unable to take proper decision and unaware of consequence

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Currently

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many adverts are acted by child artists to attract children as a target group, for certain extent they are

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having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

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They would able to make profit out of it.

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Unfortunately, this

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would cause imbalance of family budget in many houses.

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some advertisements are not appropriate for children because it contains mature or violent contents that are may not be appropriate for

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the entire family

. In conclusion

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I consider advertisements of these days has many issues as they are not up to the mark of today's society.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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