Everyone should become vegetarian,because they do not need to eat to have a healthy diet. What extent do you agree or disagree?

#diet

It is commonly believed that following vegetarian diet makes people healthy.

Although

vegetarian foods are good

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it is insufficient for a normal body

functions

Suggestion

function

.In my viewpoint,

therefore

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I consider including non vegetarian food options would be better.

Firstly

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human body

Suggestion

the human body

requires many macro and micro nutrients

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which is essential for the smooth functioning

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These nutrients may not be get all from the plant sources so

it is

it's

extremely significant to eat animal products to balance

these gap

Suggestion

these gaps

this gap

as well.To illustrate

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plant based foods contain less protein rich foods.

Moreover protein

Accept comma addition

Moreover, protein

is the key factor of body building

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lack of

this

would cause severe growth retardation.

Secondly

, depending

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

100 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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environmental benefits
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