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Everyone should become vegetarian,because they do not need to eat to have a healthy diet. What extent do you agree or disagree?

#diet
It is commonly believed that following vegetarian diet makes people healthy.
Although
 vegetarian foods are good
,
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,
it is insufficient for a normal body
functions
Suggestion
function
.In my viewpoint,
therefore
,
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,
I consider including non vegetarian food options would be better.
Firstly
,
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,
human body
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the human body
 requires many macro and micro nutrients
,
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,
which is essential for the smooth functioning
.
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.
These nutrients may not be get all from the plant sources so
it
it is
it's
 extremely significant to eat animal products to balance
these gap
Suggestion
these gaps
this gap
 as well.To illustrate
,
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,
plant based foods contain less protein rich foods.
Moreover protein
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Moreover, protein
 is the key factor of body building
,
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,
lack of
this
 would cause severe growth retardation.
Secondly
, depending
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vegetarian
  • healthy diet
  • health benefits
  • environmental benefits
  • ethical reasons
  • challenges
  • solutions
  • nutrition
  • sustainable
  • animal welfare
  • plant-based
  • vegan
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