Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a debated issue whether it is useful or

disavantageous

constituting a disadvantage

disadvantageous

for the younger generation to partake in gainful employment. There are many pros and cons

in

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of

allowing children engage in paid jobs. In my opinion, the drawbacks outweighs its benefits. Children are assumed to be in their formative stage and exposure to certain work environment is likely to be a threat to

there

of them or themselves

their

upbringing. They mostly tend to live by what they see and learn from it.

For instance

, Letting a

child

work in liquor stores or bars, may eventually make the

child

start drinking at a young age.

Therefore

, when children are left to work for money, they may end up in places that are not safe for their development.

Also

, at an early stage, education should be a fundamental requirement of every

child

. All other things

such

as jobs should be secondary in a

childs

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child's

life. To clarify, times spent studying are crucial to every young

child

and prepares them to face the labour force.

Finally

, when kids start

make

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making

money, they will have no proper knowledge of how well to spend or save their income.

On the other hand

, most people hold that kids should be left to take up paid jobs so as to help with family responsibilities. To illustrate, in

third

world Countries like Nigeria, kids are seen helping their parents with petty trading and street hawking.

This

is a way of assisting with finances in the family.

In addition

, most individuals believe that children working at a younger stage

gives

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give

them a better insight of jobs to take up when they eventually grow up.

For example

, taking up a job at a tender age gives one prior knowledge and experience about the job.

Therefore

, they find it crucial that children start partaking in paid jobs to enable them make choices in

future

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the future

. To put in a nutshell, I pen

down saying

Accept comma addition

down, saying

that children engaging in paid jobs have both benefits and drawbacks but the drawbacks outweigh the

benfits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

.