With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?
It is a thought conceived by some that tertiary institutions should integrate sports into all degree courses and make it mandatory in order to mitigate the growing population of overweight people. In my opinion, I completely agree that sports should be a must in varsities because of the
health
benefits it could result.
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To begin
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Firstly
, the rate of obesity has Linking Words
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, with the implementation of compulsory sports for all degree courses, the level of Linking Words
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people would greatly plummet. excessively fat
obese
Secondly
, students would become more active and smart rather than being sedentary. Linking Words
For example
, people who participate frequently in sports and physical games tend to be agile with good physical posture. For theses reasons, it has been shown that sports have benefits and should be seen as important.
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In addition
, the effects of sports on the mental Linking Words
health
of humans can be seen as advantageous. Rather than the study of only theoretical knowledge in the universities, Use synonyms
sport
courses should be embedded into all degrees because it helps the brain Use synonyms
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brilliant and successful
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sport
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