Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: - Explain the reasons for the noise - Apologise - Describe what action you will take

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Dear Laura, I trust you are doing fine. I was surprised to receive your letter suggesting that the noise from my flat gets to you and disturbs your evening nap. Recently, the water supply in my kitchen and bathroom got spoilt and needed to be repaired. The only time available to get the repair done by the plumber is in the evening when I return from work. The plumber had to do some wedging in the wall thereby creating a loud noise. I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience

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has caused you and I hope my heartfelt apology is accepted. In order to stop the noise from disturbing you, I have asked my brother who stays with my grandmother to come to my house during the day.

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would enable the plumber

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while everyone is at work. If you don’t mind, I would appreciate

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we can hang out together on Friday night and do some catching up together as a way of saying sorry. Warm wishes, Baba

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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