Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

It is often argued, that most of couples are paying an

enourmous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

amout

a quantity of money

amount

money

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to cover the expenses of their wedding day. In my opinion, I believe that it is more advantageous to spend the

money

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on either more valuable items or to save them, rather than spending all of the

couple

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savings in one night. To

beging

take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

begin

with, it is commonly known that with marriage comes along various responsibilities and the rates of expenses gradually increase.

In other words

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, the majority of people choose to withdraw personal loans pay for their wedding ceremony.

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, they will start their new life with a vast debt, where they will be obliged to to

overwok

use too much

overwork

over wok

themselves to cover their debt leaving no time for a

couple

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to spend together.

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, a tension will arise

leading

Suggestion

to lead

some

couple

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to either

seperate

act as a barrier between; stand between

separate

or divorce.

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, a royal wedding does not have to be expensive to be considered lovely,

therefore

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, the bride and the groom should do their

researches

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research

to figure out a

smar

showing mental alertness and calculation and resourcefulness

smart

method to divide their

money

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wisely. To state

this

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in other terms, being cautious in choosing packages for a wedding, can save tons of dollars.

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, a

couple

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can spend their savings not only on a

ceremony but

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ceremony, but

also

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on their honeymoon that they will always remember and cherish.

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, a bride can choose flowers found in the current season,

instead

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of choosing to import them.

This

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they will be saving half of the price of flower packages. In conclusion, it is

undediable

not possible to deny

undeniable

that a lovely wedding will be satisfying both the groom and the bride.

However

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, reasonable and smart choices will not only lead

for

Suggestion

a healthier

furture but

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future, but

future but

also

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more memories and places to spend the

money

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roland.farhat

Jul 26, 2019

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Extravagant
Lavish
Societal norms
Cultural heritage
Economic benefits
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Ceremonies
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Obligation
Social status
Memorable
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