Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

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It is often argued, that most of couples are paying an
enourmous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
amout
a quantity of money
amount
of
money
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to cover the expenses of their wedding day. In my opinion, I believe that it is more advantageous to spend the
money
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on either more valuable items or to save them, rather than spending all of the
couple
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savings in one night. To
beging
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
with, it is commonly known that with marriage comes along various responsibilities and the rates of expenses gradually increase.
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, the majority of people choose to withdraw personal loans pay for their wedding ceremony.
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, they will start their new life with a vast debt, where they will be obliged to to
overwok
use too much
overwork
over wok
themselves to cover their debt leaving no time for a
couple
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to spend together.
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, a tension will arise
leading
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to lead
some
couple
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to either
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
or divorce.
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, a royal wedding does not have to be expensive to be considered lovely,
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, the bride and the groom should do their
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research
to figure out a
smar
showing mental alertness and calculation and resourcefulness
smart
method to divide their
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wisely. To state
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in other terms, being cautious in choosing packages for a wedding, can save tons of dollars.
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, a
couple
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can spend their savings not only on a
ceremony but
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ceremony, but
also
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on their honeymoon that they will always remember and cherish.
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, a bride can choose flowers found in the current season,
instead
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of choosing to import them.
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they will be saving half of the price of flower packages. In conclusion, it is
undediable
not possible to deny
undeniable
that a lovely wedding will be satisfying both the groom and the bride.
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, reasonable and smart choices will not only lead
for
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to
a healthier
furture but
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future, but
future but
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more memories and places to spend the
money
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Extravagant
  • Lavish
  • Societal norms
  • Cultural heritage
  • Economic benefits
  • Luxurious
  • Ceremonies
  • Designer outfits
  • Unforgettable experience
  • Obligation
  • Social status
  • Memorable
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Grand
  • Expectations
  • Local economy
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