Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

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Modern world today

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it is sometimes believed that zoos are serving no purpose;

however

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, I completely disagree with the viewpoint as these have

relevant position

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a relevant position

in society

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These institutions educating and entertaining the public and protecting animals from extinction

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Firstly

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displaying animals in

zoo

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enable visitors to observe them from close proximity since they are under the cage.Going for

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African safari or wild hunting may not be a possible

options

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option

for many;

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visiting a

zoo

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can be resolve

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can resolve

this

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issue.To illustrate

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every

zoo

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authority

provide

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provides

visiters

someone who visits

visitors

visits

with experts guide.

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public

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the public

get

better understanding

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a better understanding

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

and wild animals.

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zoos are kind of educational institution for students who learning animal behaviour.

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, zoology and

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veterinary

students.

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most of the zoos have sufficient documents regarding particular animal so students can do their research by visiting animals here

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many animals which are on the verge extinction are protected in zoos from its predators.

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some consider

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is not his natural environment.In zoos, captured animals have been

cared

freed from illness or injury

cured

by medical experts along with providing food at regular intervals and living in a safe environment without the fear of any enemies. In conclusion

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people are divided by the idea of

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zoo

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a zoo

the zoo

zoos

and its purpose.Opponents believe that zoos are

waste but

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a waste, but

a waste but

I strongly

deney

declare untrue; contradict

deny

the statement.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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