Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both arguments and give your opinion

Many countries make a huge

investment

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in

art

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, believing that

art

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is very crucial and conducive to human growth in various aspects.

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, some people argue that the

money

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might have been better spent on developing health and

education

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rather than

art

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. In

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article, I will deal with both sides and add my thought on them. On the one hand, the most important factor which many countries want to invest a huge public fund in

art

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is that it is very influential and decisive subject or form in people’s mental and emotional development.

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, many nations seem to prioritize the

investment

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in

art

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since they believe that investing in

art

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will be the most efficient way to spend the public

money

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for the people’s benefit.

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to

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, the people’s creativeness which is frequently picked to determine the nation’s competitiveness is largely affected by the extent of the nation’s

investment

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in

art

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.

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, it is still

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a meaningful investment

investment

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in

art

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for the public’s welfare.

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, some people insist that the public fund should be invested in reforming health and

education

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since these fields are the most effective areas in people’s mental and physical development.

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, the public

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spent in enhancing health and

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is contributing to more people’s benefit as some people who are not financially abundant are strictly restricted by the fee that people have to pay in order to enjoy the

art

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exhibition or performance.

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, the

money

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invested in

art

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is not fully dedicated in the public’s

developments

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developing

and it might be misused for the benefit of the haves. In conclusion. I oppose the idea that the

money

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should be spent

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in

only making those heath and

education

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sectors better as

art

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should be recognized for its importance and dedication

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to

the human development. People should make an effort to put more resource on building a better environment for

art

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.