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People argue that raising children in today’s society is more difficult than in the past. Others believe that it is much easier due to all the innovations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that raising children in a current
society
 is a tough task compared to the past. While there are people who consider it very easy due to all the scientific and creative innovations that we see today. I agree that these innovative ways will help in raising children and make them great citizens of the nation. On the one hand, the parents of the children who are both working professionals are stating that raising children is a big struggle in today’s busy world as they have to take good care of their children in their absence. The children always need good parenting and care as they develop most of the habits of
parents
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the parents
. Currently children are profoundly impacted by television shows or social media trends that are going viral. Recently an application called TikTok has shown a massive impact on children and youth of many countries. Where numerous children have committed suicide due to parents, restricting them from using it.
However
, there are a few affirmative programs over the TV and internet to excel their creativity.
Also
, today’s school or college education fees
is
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are
 so expensive that several parents are forced to stop sending their children for higher studies.
On the other hand
, some parents think that raising children is comfortable in a current technically advanced
society
. Recent scientific studies have shown that 40 % of current generation children are improving their IQ levels with the audio and visual means of
educative
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educational
 applications available on the internet. These applications
develop
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are developed
 curiosity in children to solve puzzles, build teamwork and excel their logical thinking, art and creativity.
Also
, information and knowledge
is
Suggestion
are
 now open and exists everywhere on the internet. There are cases where people
achieved
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achieve
 their dream goals without even going to school and understanding them from YouTube. At
last
, Lot of studies have shown that
children
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children's
 reading books daily can double their imaginary power. I agree that these new innovative ways in current
society
 will help
smoothly raising
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smoothly raise
to smoothly raise
 children. To conclude,
although
 views differ whether raising children in today’s
society
 is difficult or not, I restate that today’s creative ways, good parenting, love and affection of parents will help even in raising children and making them proud citizens of the country. We cannot force stop the existence of our
next
 generation.
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