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Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals. Why is this happening? what can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more?

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Currently, the majority of the visitors to museums and historical sites are international tourists rather than local citizens. The reasons making the locals less visiting these sites are a high entrance fee and not persuasive to them, while modernization of these sites and making a mandatory trip for the school children would significantly increase the number of local visitors. To embark upon, as museums and historical sites represent the culture and history of a nation, most of the citizens in the country are familiar with their cultural and historical background which makes them feel disinterested in visiting a place
that is
 monotonous in the ambience.
Moreover
,
high admission price
Suggestion
the high admission price
 is a concerning factor for them.
In other words
, these sites captivate the tourists as they show interest in knowing the culture of a different country, for which they do not hesitate to spend any amount of money.
Although
 there are numerous ways to tackle
this
, the most effective ways would be,
firstly
, modernizing the museums and historical places by placing additional latest items would potentially attract the citizens.
For example
, it has been proven that, by renovating the old museums with technology in Malaysia, has established a huge popularity within the nation.
Secondly
, all the schools in the nation should include
trip
Suggestion
trips
 to museums as a part of
curriculum
Suggestion
a curriculum
the curriculum
 which develops interest in the children, even motivates their parents to visit these places. To conclude, while the museums and historical places are being visited mostly by foreigners, locals do not find interest in visiting. Updating them with modern ways and making the visit as a part of school
activity
Suggestion
activities
 would potentially rise the local visitors. There has been
increase
Suggestion
an increase
 in the media attention towards famous people who achieved success coming from normal backgrounds. Why is
this
 happening? Do you think is it a positive or negative development?
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