Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for crimes, while others argue that the circumstance for every crime and the motivation for committing it should be taken into account when deciding the punishment

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In every civilized society, the rule of
law
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and adequate
punishment
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are sacred entities of human development that should not be sacrificed on the altar of sentiments. Some are of the opinion that the prevailing circumstance surrounding a
crime
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should be looked into before a judgment is given. I strongly believe that every
crime
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must have a definitive
punishment
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. On the one hand, it is commonly believed that the natural man is not structured for
crime
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.
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to say, most of these crimes were not primarily intended in the
first
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place, and certain factors may have contributed to
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
them. Since man was not created that way, whenever a
law
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is broken, it is important that the perpetuating factors responsible for these crimes must be looked into, before a judgement is passed.
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gives us the
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
of having a balanced view of the entire situation. Zambia,
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, saw a fall in their prison congestion from about 25% to 15%, when prevailing circumstances surrounding a
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became an important factor while delivering judgement.
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, turning a blind eye to these factors is like throwing away the baby and the bath water, whereby making making the judgment an unfair one.
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, I do not
beieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that the aforementioned
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
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stand
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stands
up to scrutiny.
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, having a definitive
punishment
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for every
crime
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deter criminals.
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, when it becomes a matter of public opinion that every
crime
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attracts a particular
punishment
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, it scares people away from
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acts, thereby making them extremely careful about
crime
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.
Furthermore
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, the
law
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is a respecter of no one.
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is because the rule of
law
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is the backbone of civilization. When the
law
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is allowed to have its full course by strictly punishing offenders, without considering the individual circumstance
propergating
transmit from one generation to the next
propagating
it,
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sanity is brought into every
spheres
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sphere
of human life, particularly in climes with
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a high crime rate
crime
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rate.
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, the Punch Newspapers revealed that
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crime rate
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the crime rate
in the Nigerian Universities reduced from 16% to 10% over a decade when students were immediately expelled for every act of violence.
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, making these institutions safe for learning and other academic activities In conclusion, the importance of having a fixed
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to
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for
every
crime
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cannot be over-emphasized. It plays an important role in curbing
crime
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dramatically; and more importantly, it
also
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helps make our world a better place to live in.
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