Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

With the advent of the technology, visiting the foreign countries by the visitor
is becoming
Suggestion
has become
easier since few years ago. Most of the people believe that increment in the number of tourists would be advantageous for native people and
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be motivated.
However
, in my opinion, I completely agree with the
preposition
(logic) a statement that affirms or denies something and is either true or false
proposition
as
this
will enhance the economy of the visiting place and job opportunities. A rise in the number of
tourism
would be beneficial for the economic growth of the tourist place as more and more people visit there and spend their money for living and purchasing antique pieces.
Such
money can be used for the
maintaince
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
of the place so that more people visit there.
For example
, a recent article published in the newspaper revealed that huge amount of money has spent by the
sightvisitors
Suggestion
sight visitors
on purchasing the
soveniers
something of sentimental value
souvenir
and antique
peices
a separate part of a whole
pieces
as compared to the previous data.
Thus
,
tourism
is becoming beneficial for native people will be benefited. The
second
major factor which is increased due to international
tourism
is the job opportunities. With the rise of tourists in the tourist places will opens more job opportunities which include guides, car driver and
restuarant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
. So
indegious
originating where it is found
indigenous
person find jobs in their native places.
For instance
, a recent
studies
Suggestion
study
declared that
tourism
has declined the unemployment by 30% as compared to the previous data.
Therefore
, sightseers are helping people in getting valuable jobs. To conclude, International
tourism
has been increasing for the
last
years and becoming beneficial among the local community as it will open more jobs and raise the economy, so
this
should be
encourged
inspired with confidence
encouraged
. In my viewpoint, international
tourism
should be
encourged
inspired with confidence
encouraged
by the people and government.
Submitted by Rajneet Kaur on

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