Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
With the advent of the technology, visiting the foreign countries by the visitor
is becoming
easier since few years ago. Most of the people believe that increment in the number of tourists would be advantageous for native people and Suggestion
has become
shoud
be motivated. expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
However
, in my opinion, I completely agree with the preposition
as (logic) a statement that affirms or denies something and is either true or false
proposition
this
will enhance the economy of the visiting place and job opportunities.
A rise in the number of tourism
would be beneficial for the economic growth of the tourist place as more and more people visit there and spend their money for living and purchasing antique pieces. Such
money can be used for the maintaince
of the place so that more people visit there. activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
For example
, a recent article published in the newspaper revealed that huge amount of money has spent by the sightvisitors
on purchasing the Suggestion
sight visitors
soveniers
and antique something of sentimental value
souvenir
peices
as compared to the previous data. a separate part of a whole
pieces
Thus
, tourism
is becoming beneficial for native people will be benefited.
The second
major factor which is increased due to international tourism
is the job opportunities. With the rise of tourists in the tourist places will opens more job opportunities which include guides, car driver and restuarant
. So a building where people go to eat
restaurant
indegious
person find jobs in their native places. originating where it is found
indigenous
For instance
, a recent studies
declared that Suggestion
study
tourism
has declined the unemployment by 30% as compared to the previous data. Therefore
, sightseers are helping people in getting valuable jobs.
To conclude, International tourism
has been increasing for the last
years and becoming beneficial among the local community as it will open more jobs and raise the economy, so this
should be encourged
. In my viewpoint, international inspired with confidence
encouraged
tourism
should be encourged
by the people and government.inspired with confidence
encouraged
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