A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

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Dear Jack, I was so pleased to hear that you are planning to go on a camping holiday

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summer. I'd love a camping holiday because it's your time to visit the camping site and gain experience,

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as how to survive outside without any high-tech facilities ,

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as Unlimited Internet and a refrigerator for food storage , and more.

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, there is a beautiful Lake, so you can do activities like a boat ride, swim in the lake and visit a vintage cafe where you can get

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coffee.

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, make sure at night you properly close your tent before sleeping, because there are a lot of insects inside the grass, which is harmful to your health if they come inside ,

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is a major drawback of

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camping. I'd like to go with you for camping because its long time

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haven't go for a trip or holiday. When we meet, we will discuss the memories that we capture in the photographs. I'm waiting for your response. Yours truly, Manpreet

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May 20, 2026

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Answer all three parts more fully.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear links between ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Keep one main idea in each paragraph.

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Use a more natural friendly tone in some lines.

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You answer all parts of the task.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear opening and ending.

coherence and cohesion

Your ideas are easy to follow in most parts.

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The tone is mostly friendly.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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