Some countries have laws that prohibit animals being used in circuses or other forms of entertainment because it is cruel to keep animals in an environment that can cause them stress. Should all countries have laws to prevent animals being used in circuses and similar forms of entertainment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Animals are created by the nature same as of human with different characteristics and shapes.They have all rights to live
in
Suggestion
on
this
earth with freedom what actually people does not have
.It is one of a living organismsSuggestion
do not have
,
which cannot be used as a pastime for public to relief Accept space
,
they
stress by stressing them.For of them or themselves
their
this
reason,
nations should have rules to not use the animals for the entertainment of peopleAccept space
,
,
Accept space
,
otherwise
they would be disturbed and stressful which can make them to die through mental problems.
First
of all, nature thought that animals has
only five sense that why Suggestion
have
it
not equal to people in the way of thinking.It does not know what other creature it is
it's
are
or anything about othersSuggestion
is
,
they will just survive for Accept space
,
themseleves
by eating food from forestreflexive form of "them"
themselves
,
drinking water from rivers.Our people have a Accept space
,
think
to live a a special situation
thing
luxious
life or a posh lifestyledisplaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
,
but the animals only want a freedom to live in Accept space
,
this
society.So, the public should not disturb them to have pleasure
.The government Suggestion
the pleasure
have
to take the steps to give the awareness to the society that animals is not for our Suggestion
has
uses
.
a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
users
Secondly
,
many animals are more useful to Accept space
,
mankind which
is actually not known to them.The cows are giving milk to humans for their energy, but we are Accept comma addition
mankind, which
racing
them in public like car racing which is not a right way of gratitude towards animals by people.We don't have the power to kill or hurt them for our increasing in quantity or value
raising
luxious
happiness.The authority should not allow displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
this
kind of activities, and make the rules more harder to prevent animals from any anyone, who have a cruel behaviour.
To conclude,
the Accept space
,
governement
should make a path to live the animals in their own way without human interference.The public to be the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
caution
that our bliss should not Suggestion
cautious
depends
on Suggestion
depend
the unhappy
of an animal.Suggestion
the unhappiness
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