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Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage?

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Today cell phones are a major part of our life. It has made things more convenient by enabling us to communicate with each other in small amount of time. One of the most used functions today on the phone is not calling, but instant
text
 messaging. Texting
message
 is an easy and discrete way of communication with others but can
also
 cause
few
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fewer
 problems physically and mentally.
Eventhough
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Even though
 everyone
use
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uses
 their phone all the time, there are certain places which does not permit us to receive calls, in
such
 situation
text
 helps us to keep updated.
Text
 messages
does not lead
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do not lead
 to noise or any kind of disturbance to people sitting
next
 to us, unless phones are on silent mode and the
text
 messages
also
 acts as evidence or proof in court of law. It does not need immediate response to the sent
text
, it can be viewed as per the convenience and replied by receiver
accordingly
. With an advancement in technology like read receipt, auto correct, grammar rectification, language translation there is increased uptrend in
text
 messaging.
Text
message
 are acknowledged
of
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by
for
 having some disadvantage albeit it do have several merits. As in most
situation
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situations
 it is not possible to get instant response and shall
also
 has a probability of misunderstanding as the
text
message
 may be interpreted differently by each individual. Teens these
days
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days'
text
 while
driving which has
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driving, which has
 caused a serious issue in the society,
however
Accept comma addition
however, this
this
 can be curbed to the possible extent. In conclusion, the
text
message
 has several
advantage
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advantages
 as compared to its drawback, with an improved communication, multiple languages and awareness these drawbacks can be curtailed.
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