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machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans . Do you agree or disagree?

In today's scenario
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people totally dependent on technology or machines.
Machines
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Machine
translation
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is the most helpful
machine
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 for people as it can help to understand the
language
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 of another nation
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 But, people think that it does not work as same as humans and it
can not
can not
cannot
 take
place
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the place
 of them in
present
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the present
 as well as in
future
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the future
. In my opinion
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I agree with the given statement
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as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 consider that humans are the best way to translate any
language
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To begin
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 with
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translation
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 machines can not replace humans
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 a
machine
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can not
can not
cannot
 express our emotional which a
person
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 can show when he is translating any
language
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 and emotion can show that in what way we want to talk to someone
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 To illustrate
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in Russia
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many companies
has used
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have used
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 machines for
meetings but
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meetings, but
 at the end they failed to use it because it
create
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creates
 conflict between countries as they do not understand the
emotional
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emotion
emotions
 of each other
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And
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it gave a huge loss of productivity to many companies. On the more
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a
machine
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 can translate only that languages which are collected in it and there
are
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is
 plenty of
language
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 which
can not
can not
cannot
 be collected in machines because a
machine
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 might be loaded and could be
damage
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damaging
damaged
 and these kind of machines are usually expensive. So
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it is not easy to make
new one
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new ones
a new one
.
For example
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it has been seen in a research report that
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50%of people do not prefer to utilise a
translation
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machine
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 because it
can not
can not
cannot
 translate all the languages and they think that a
person
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 is better than
machine
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 because he can translate any kind of
language
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 with expression.
As a result
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because of these reasons machines can not replace
humans which
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humans, which
can gave
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can give
 a huge loss to people. In conclusion
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,
although
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 many machines are available in these days to translate a
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language but
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language, but
 it can never take
place
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the place
 of human because a
person
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 can translate any
language
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 with expression and in a nice way which make
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
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 understandable as well as built strong bonding between two nations.

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