Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than homemade food these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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A greater number of people would prefer outdoor cuisine.While other like to take homemade recipe
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I think taking ready meals has more advantages. On the one hand
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ready cuisine is preferable to those who works outside of
home
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the home
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It is time saving for them
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Similarly
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packed
food
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specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
suitable for school and college going pupils.
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manufactured meals are easy to carry
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one can take his/her
food
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with him with no difficulties.
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Furthermore people
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Furthermore, people
who seek for
variety
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a variety
of meals, always prefer ready
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as they can choice their favourite one
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Again some
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Again, some
ready cuisines strictly follow several nutritious
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elements
which
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are
necessary for proper growth of
body
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the body
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For example
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sports man
take
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takes
many nutritious foods which may difficult to make at home
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Again some
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Again, some
meals are manufactured by the instruction of
doctor
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doctors
a doctor
the doctor
to serve specific patients. Above
all people
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all, people
usually take ready meals to eliminate the complexity of cooking.Coming back from work people become tired to cook
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So ready
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is the best option for them
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On the other hand
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taking ready meals have some negative site too. Some time manufactured
food
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does not maintain health issue. The
food
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may prepare in an unhealthy way.
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Again, some
shop
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shops
sell expired
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which is
threat
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a threat
for
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to
our health
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Moreover most
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Moreover, most
of the ready cuisine contains
huge amount
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a huge amount
of fat which can make us sick. One research show that taking excessive outdoor
food
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reduce the disease prevention ability oh human body. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
would like to say that
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although
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people willing to eat outdoor cuisines for various
purpose but
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purposes, but
purposes but
taking much of it is harmful for our body and health
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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