Robots are taking all jobs all around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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Artificially intelligent robots are progressively replacing the humans in the workplace. While it is suggested that most of the menial

obs

the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

jobs

will be taken by robots, few works which require

human touch

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the human touch

a human touch

cannot be replaced. In my opinion, I consider that there are some jobs will be carried out by people. To embark on, robots take

majir part

Suggestion

a major part

major part

the major part

of the

work

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that does not require specific and complex human skills.

In other words

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, many companies will turn to artificial intelligence because it is far less expensive as compared to hiring, training and employing a human. The supermarkets in Australia,

for example

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, many cashiers have been replaced by these automated machines that cost less.

In addition

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, they

work

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around the clock and does not require holidays or holiday pay. For these reasons, jobs that can be replaced by

robotic station

Suggestion

a robotic station

will be replaced.

On the other hand

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, there are some human jobs that cannot be replaced by these robots. Put simply, some

work

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needs 'human touch'. These jobs include medicines, psychology, education and social

work

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where physical interaction is mandatory.

For instance

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, to cure some

disease it

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disease, it

is needed that

diagnosis

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the diagnosis

of disease should be done by human doctor as having similar family.

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, robots will never be able to achieve social bonding. To conclude, most of the human employment will be overtaken by robots. Unskilled labour will eventually be done entirely by artificial machines,

however

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, the job that

require

Suggestion

requires

human specific skills will always exist. In my opinion, very few human jobs will be safe in increasing artificially intelligent workforce.

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